Love
This is a post about Love
It's how I imagine Love
It's what I remember about Love
Or wondering if I actually know about Love
It's me second guessing
And me shouting at the world
Love
Love
This is a post about Love
It's how you look at me Love
It's what I hear in his voice Love
Or wondering if anything will ever be as good Love
It's me counting the years
And me losing too much sleep
Love
Love
This is a post about Love
It's how many times my heart beat too fast Love
It's what I can't forget Love
Or wondering if I read that too many times Love
It's me thinking about you
And all-consuming
Love
-Bonnie
I really liked this. I liked the format. For some reason, I act like free-verse is the only kind of poetry/blogging/whatever. But sometimes following a format can be liberating, if that makes sense. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteLOVE. All-consuming. Well said.
You know love better than any of us
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DeleteSame with Nelson. Everything flowed and this would sound so good read out loud.
ReplyDelete"This is a post about Love
It's how you look at me Love
It's what I hear in his voice Love
Or wondering if anything will ever be as good Love
It's me counting the years
And me losing too much sleep"
i've read this for 6 days in a row now it's so nice
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